Introduction

       "That's the sewage. Now it's passing through the slum." Slums are the rundown part of a city or town. They are places pushed out by the rapid growth of urban populations. These slums are overpacked with people of all ages. These slums have negative affects on the world's population because they full of diseases, they are high in crime rates, and they ae taking over urban populations.

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dear Stefanie Alejandra Teyer,

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Outline

I. Introduction
       A. "Thats the sewage. Now its passing through the slum."
       B. Slum: Rundown part of town
       C. Slums have a negative affect on populations because they are dirty, they are high in crime rates,    and they are taking over the urban populations.
       D. Slums are dirty.
II. Defendable Point #1
       A. Slums are dirty and have diseases.
       B. "Slums throughout the developing world are - in a sense- giant cesspools."
       C. Unhealthy for human life
       D. Slums are high in crime rates.
III. Defendable Point #2
       A. In addition, slums are high in crime rates.
       B. "So they are being socialized in this very hostile enviourment, and some become very angry, so                
              slums are also breeding grounds for anti-social behavior.
       C. Slums cause people to be violent.
       D. Slums are taking over human populations
IV. Defendable Point #3
       A. Lastly, slums are taking over human populations.
       B. "26 million by 2025"
       C. Population is growing rapidly.
       D. In conclusion...
V. Conclusion
      A. Slums are dangerous for the world
      B. They are dirty, they are high in crime rates, and they are growing rapidly.
      C. High in disease, encourage hostility, 26 million.
      D. Need to rise up to stop slums.
  

Thesis Statement

Slums are the run down part of a city where there is poor housing and a lack of security. These slums have a negative affect on human populations because the slums are full of diseases, they are high in crime rates, and they are taking over urban areas.